Keep working at it!
This track feels like it drones on, you don't have anything that pops out to the listener.
It is partially the mix. The track lacks clarity, the mix is muddy.
If you are not mixing on studio monitors, put some money into a decent pair.
It will boost your chances of having your listeners enjoying your music. (It is not something the average listener notices consciously, but they do subconsciously.)
Yea ur right but tha songs pretty old..thanks for listening
I understand this was pumped out quickly..
but it's so damned over-compressed!
I agree with xKore.
This is a typical "Newgrounds Trance Track". It may be what the young Newgrounders are looking for, but in reality professional labels wouldn't give this a second demo listen. There is way too much cheesy climactic crap going on.
IMO you could have made a label worthy if you took the intro, threw away everything else and made it minimal.
On top of all this, the mix is muddy, lacking all of the proper high frequencies needed to emphasize the lead and sfx. You should read up on compression, especially multiband limiting usage.
Good idea, poorly executed. 3/5 - 6/10
LOL
You just took the original and chopped it. This is hardcore failure and stealing. It is also killing creativity.
Obviously Stolen.
You did not make this, nor do you know anything about producing classical music. Name one VST or DXI Plug-In that could have made this, and I will hold back on reporting this.
Wow dude. Ill remove it, its old and i used a program called MAgix. It uses loops. Now get the sand out of your vagina.....
Too much sidechain
the melody can barely be heard. The track is separated into 2 parts, the kick, and everything else. The clap was near lost in the mix, along with the a lot of the hat frequencies. Your bass is being gobbled by this large sidechain you got going. The general mastering is not great, but i expect you to fix all this since this is a small demo. overall, decent job, I would just stray away from this overwhelming (to the mix, not the ear) sidechain and general bass that's being gobbled.
Without the sidechain its alot worse. Thats all i have to say about that, as the song was meant to have heavy sidechain from the beginning
Hot Damn!
Create job guys! This is really something! Great transitioning. A Download and 5 for you! My KRKs want more bass though!
wtf is with people on this site.
This is great man! Sounds very clean. Vocals would add a lot.
Second Download of 09.
I really want to remix this haha.
Ok, I'll pm you about that
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